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I want to know your every thought
I want to be your everything
When you cry I want to be the one to wipe the tears from your cheek
I want you to be the only one I hold
I want to be with you every waking moment
When your in pain I want to be the one to comfort you
I am nothing without you
I am a nobody without you
When I'm with you nothing else matters
I can't think straight because of you
I am head over heals for you
When will these feelings end?
if you can think of a good title for it tell me and ill resubmit it with the title....
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jedijorel Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2006  Hobbyist Filmographer
ONE.
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Slowlydying Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2006
One critique: When your in pain I want to be the one to comfort you Change your to you're. :D
Good poem. Keep writing.
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piromonkey Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2006
ok :P
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Jevex Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2006   Writer
Tribute to Corey?
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piromonkey Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2006
if you want to think that sure...dude i lost your # you should send it to me in a note i would have called you ages ago but my other phone broke
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